Pleasantly Persistent - Free Audiobook

I've been working on this song off and on for at least a month now. I'd render the latest version and stick it on my desktop where it would tempt me to listen, and eventually, encourage me to make changes. It's my first solid attempt at making some trance. My goal was to capture the big thud of the bass kick and the immersive "wall of sound" the synths create when fused together. I'm still not completely satisfied, so leave some comments!